Summary

This is inspired by the prompt about Mo’olelo and noticing the stories of your place

"It is hard for the modern, intellectually rigid and extroverted mind to sense the subjective relationship of the genuine Hawaiian to Nature, visible and invisible." -- via https://www.manoaheritagecente...


we 
don't listen 
we
barely hear
we
forget noticing
we
lose ourselves

we
the stories
of the world
embedded in this place
remain undiscovered

we
wander this terrain
of rock and soil
and river

we
need to linger longer
in the quiet,
listening for

us

we
should listen
we
can hear
we
are noticing
we
find ourselves

here

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msfilasne · June 21, 2023 00:30

Ahhh... the rhythm of this is piece is everything! It invited me to read it out loud to myself. It sounds like drums. Or maybe rainfall? Thank you for sharing your words.

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